I think you did an okay job im not really feeling it. It needs to have more oomph. You did a great job of bringing the meaning of the words out though. :)
The first thing I notice when I look at this is how well you did with choosing fonts to fit the meaning of your words.
In my opinion, it could use some color to further emphasize the meanings of the words. The black and white seems a little dull to me. Other than that you could enhance your heirarchy in some way - I don't really see the starting point or any direction for my eye to travel. It seems that each word has an equal amount of power in this piece.
I like this, but there doesn't seem to be much variety. The fonts don't seem to describe the words, and there's a lot of blank space. I really like the word Sarcastic however. It seems delicate, just like how sarcasm is. Having just a hint.
nice piece! ............ some stuff you could change is make a distinct focal point because right now im not sure where my eyes go to first. also you could change the font size which would help the focal point and would take more negative space, but overall nice piece!
I think you did an okay job im not really feeling it. It needs to have more oomph. You did a great job of bringing the meaning of the words out though. :)
ReplyDeleteThe first thing I notice when I look at this is how well you did with choosing fonts to fit the meaning of your words.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, it could use some color to further emphasize the meanings of the words. The black and white seems a little dull to me. Other than that you could enhance your heirarchy in some way - I don't really see the starting point or any direction for my eye to travel. It seems that each word has an equal amount of power in this piece.
I like this, but there doesn't seem to be much variety. The fonts don't seem to describe the words, and there's a lot of blank space. I really like the word Sarcastic however. It seems delicate, just like how sarcasm is. Having just a hint.
ReplyDeletenice piece! ............ some stuff you could change is make a distinct focal point because right now im not sure where my eyes go to first. also you could change the font size which would help the focal point and would take more negative space, but overall nice piece!
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